To
:
David @yahoo.com
About: A school trip
Dear David,
How are you? I miss you so much. I 'd like to
tell you about a nice school trip I went on last month. I went to a four
day school trip in Ismailia . It was my first experience to stay
away from my home for four days. during those four days school trip, I learned
number of thing that can helpful in anyone’s routing life. For example, I
learned how to communicate with others. I also learned about to take care of my
possessions. In fact, I became more responsible during those four days. In
addition to that, this school trip taught me to talk with other people, how to
make friends, and to share my things with them. In conclusion, my school trip
to Ismailia was
exciting and unforgettable because during that trip, I learned many good things
that are useful for my life. The time passed so fast. We had to go back. On our
way home, we had fun together. At the end of the trip, I was so tired that I
fell asleep at the back chair. I will never forget that wonderful trip!
Love forever,
Ramzy
Good ideas, but you have some mistakes:
ReplyDelete1-number of thing >>> things (line 3).
2-can helpful in anyone’s routing life>>>>can be helpful in anyone’s routine life.
3-learned about to take care >>>> learned to take(line 5)